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Reviews for "Plot Bunny"

Nice, but could be better. Have you thought about whipping up an idea for a script for the characters? Because for now, this looks more like a loop .gif. I don't think it has to be that long, maybe about at least 1:30 to 3:00. And maybe you can add what happens next (author chases plot bunny around the neighborhood, and for some crazy reason, the whole world, then comes back to the room and shakes the crap outta the bunny, and the bunny just ends up with a question mark on its head and...the author has a lightbulb, with a bright idea; to come up with a plot/story to write). Just a suggestion. Hope you can get something done. Upon watching this, I felt there's room for improvement so gave you a 5 for the vote.

Wasn't really a huge fan of the fact that so short, and the loop backed that notion. The animation was pretty bad, as was the voice acting. A plot bunny is an idea that gnaws at you until written, which this video doesn't really show that. But I do like the art, for the most part. I will give you that.

All in all, I think if you spent more time on it, it'd be pretty cool. Like if the character went on this whole elaborate adventure to find Plot Bunny.

Giving you a 5 just because your voice has such a weird range. From almost male deep to an alien sounding "nOoOoO" to the fact it seems three other people do the voice from that point on. Grats!

This isn't bad at all, simple and kind of funny plot, the only thing really making it seem half assed is length. Everything else is really good, the drawing is clean and sound matches nicely, easily understandable and such forth. it's enjoyable in it's own right, be proud of your work. I hope to see more stuff.