An overall good idea, but the pacing and timing was a bit off. I could be a bit faster at the begining.
I love the amount of detail you have put into this. A good animation style, I like it.
But HOLY MACKEREL that was a stab right in the childhood. And not a pleasant one.
In fact, I think that really hurt. Yes, it did.
I'm off now to watch something more uplifting.