Great job man!
All the action is fast and smart, and the story behind it is also amazing!
Please continue with the serie!
Great job man!
All the action is fast and smart, and the story behind it is also amazing!
Please continue with the serie!
Thanks!
I was kind of wondering if I successful told the story without any dialogues, I am glad it make sense to you.
This segment of my comment is BEFORE watching part 2. Been waiting for this mf right here to come. I liked the first one. 5/5 . Let's see what part 2 has to bring. But, I already know , so imma go ahead and put my 5/5 star up now .
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AHHHH! Red head girl? Red head baby? So, was Snapshot the shooter or the father? And who's the fat man (that whole Noir thing- lovin' it). Do I have to 365 days again to find out ?!?! AHHH Nooo
The female robot pilot was the baby, she seeks vengeance for her parents, the mother was the fat boss's wife/woman, who hired the "Snapshooter". (Note that both the boss and the woman wear rings.)
Well, the part 2 concludes the story. Sorry, if the story wasn't very clear.
Thanks for the 5 stars!
Oh, I see now, hes the assissian, and the girl in the robot is the baby from the target he killed! And she wants revenge!
Well, that was pretty good.
Well, thank you~ :)
VERY good! I was quite impressed with this one! Though the explanation you included of the end was also helpful in my understanding of the storyline. I didn't quite piece it together when I saw it. But please, continue the story because I really want to see what happens next!
Now I realize the pacing is a bit too fast. I gave too much information at once and moved on before some audiences can fully digest them... I will implant what I have learned from this in my future works.