I actually liked this. short and simple, but it was kind of neat. Things to improve on: artwork, linework, and animation. I understand the linework is done purposely like that in the beginning, but after he turns into humanoid shape the lines are still kinda rough. the animation was pretty decent overall, but could use more frames for smoother transitions. I know its a lot more work and time to make very smooth animation, but the end result is so much nicer. keep up the good work, look forward to seeing how you improve with your next submission.
Reviews for "Puddy"
a loading screen and play button is amiss, but otherwise it's a good animation. a bit plotless but hey, as it's your first there's nothing wrong with that. i'll give it a solid 4/5!
keep it up, and get a play button on the next one ( i think you can download one here on NG...)
Mandeljam responds:
Good to know. Thanks for the help and feedback.
so this is why the world did not end :D I like the animation. Nice.