verry good i hope other's apreciate it as much as i did. great work.
Reviews for "Torn"
Very "Steadfast Tin Soldier". Well done, sir. The only thing that felt a little off was - why did the girl wait until after the paper doll had crawled back to tape up her leg. Couldn't she just have done that to begin with?
AtroxChobatsu responds:
Thank you! :D
It was actually supposed to be the mother that finds them. If you look at the hallway shadow, it has her hairstyle (the girl has a ponytail).
good
I was quite impressed at how beautiful this was. It's so great that you won an award, not just on this website, but on another. Speaking of second places, this is currently the second highest ranked submission of all time! I was a bit confused by it. I thought it was going to be more of a Valentine's Day flash. It looked like the first person was a boy at first.
That's what confused me, I thought it was going to be a romantic story. I know it wasn't intended to be about lesbians or anything, it just came like that to me. This was still a wonderfully powerful story. I think my favorite part would be when her foot gets cut off. It's just so unexpected.
cutting figures out of paper will never be the same for me again D''''''8
fuk dis sheet *whine*