The designs are very solid but the animation is very good!!!
Reviews for "Kriesis Episode 1"
Pretty good flash. Will be interesting to see what happens in the second one. Keep it up.
MOA-OZZY responds:
Thanks man, will do
you spelled a bunch of the subtitles wrong, I had huge problems with the facial proportions in a number of scenes, and what was with the immediate collateral damage from the landing? i mean who was that guy? was he just an extra?
apart from that it was reasonable. it flows a lot like most anime especially how all the characters keep saying ominous junk and rarely explain anything. don't get me wrong that's sometimes a plus. anyway if you could step up the art and subtitles a bit for episode 2 I'd be happy to give it a 5. as for this one i enjoyed it, but it wasn't all it could have been so i feel a 4 is appropriate.
as a side note for all you grammar [german soldiers during the years of WWII] reading this and getting pissed off at my lack of capitalization of the first letter of every sentence and maybe a few i's here and there, thanks for caring.
MOA-OZZY responds:
looool the first scene with that guy was the first ever non-sprite animation I ever did XD. I decided to leave it in because it brings back memories and it made me laugh. As for spelling and stuff. some of the things said were in slang so I wrote it in slang. And I put most of it through spell check on microsoft word... oh well, next episode wont have as much spelling mistakes hopefully.
Dude that was really kewl! I can't even imagine the time you spent on it, my patience is so short when it comes to animating and art in general! Well done!!
MOA-OZZY responds:
Ahh the hard part was the story. Now that I know the plot the second episode won't take so long... If i don't get too lazy with it
awesome, corny but awesome and as my criticism i dont mean to be rude but maybe swap the lines for the paint brush, it looks a lot smoother
MOA-OZZY responds:
It was just a test episode. I know it's corny but yeah, you live and you learn. My next series will be much better