Although you gave a warning beforehand the extensive text simply needs more drawings. I don't mind clicking a few times more often as long as reading is not all I do. Give me some graphical pointers like in The Sagittarian(s).
I think pointing to Steelcurse as a "similar game" is misleading. Apart from the universe it shares next to nothing with thsi game. That being said I still recommend playing both The Children of Brinn and Steelcurse. As similar games I'd rather have chosen the games from The Sagittarian series, plus they have awesome music.
A few typoes I encountered:
Tricklefoot
"the the"
thye
repsonds
"Oh you Brinners ain't so happy now are, ya?" - comma
frour
"hammer is wide arches"
"Simple minded"
"clear hs is"
Gaurdian
excalims
surpsied
"spirits ferocity"
"reaches next room"
"that one thing is, 'reinforced'" - comma
Gaven
"lets continue" - let's
"round up any remaining lizards and put to the blade" - +them
"lizard men"
Not sure about this next one. What is covered? If it's the crates blankets either hide the being or are irrelevant:
"One of them holds a being of some type. They're covered in a blanket though."