Slapping shitty voiceacting and stolen sprite assets on your poorly written fanfiction is not a formula for making a good animation.
This is awful, and the fact that it was featured is horrendously depressing.
Reviews for "4 Swords Misadventures 8"
I thought the episode moved incredibly slow. The voice acting wasn't all that bad or anything but the delivery of the lines made it feel like the whole thing drug on a lot longer than it should have. Because of this most of the jokes and situations I could not find any hilarity in with such bad timing. Sprite animations no longer have any appeal to me, unless they are able to do something really special. I did not think your animating was bad by any means but I never found anything exciting or new about it, either. The story line as well was drug out too long over the episode that I failed to pay much attention to what was going on.
My advice to future episodes is to work on the timing. Work on a better, more inspired voice recording and overall faster pacing in the episode.