Really amazing!
Like it! Song,Animation,Story :)! but the size D:
Reviews for "Don't Look Back"
We're all chasing that one special thing.
Beautiful As always.
Good luck with the Competition.
i love the smooth animation and the meaning :)
This one was alright. I think the effort put into the frames could have been distributed differently to allow for more impact with less work required. There's also some frames that seem like they were just placed in there for no reason.
Example: The shot at 0:20 feels very out of place and it doesn't add anything to the piece as a whole; there is no transition into the camera pan. If you wanted to get some camera panning for an impressive/introductory effect, it really should have transitioned from the shot at 0:15 or 0:17 rather than cutting. The previous piece you uploaded had similar issues and I would suggest really focusing on figuring out how to do more with less.
Also, something to be careful of: where the average viewer's attention will likely fall on the image. In many cases, you want to try to guide the viewer's attention to some point on the screen without them having to refocus themselves and miss out on what may have been intended to be the center of attention. Overall it was okay in this short, but there were a few rough spots like the transition to the rollercoaster part (which I liked). You have the power to control what people look at specifically at the screen through color theory; use it!
I hope you find this helpful, I have deep respect for your talents and I am eager to see how they evolve over time.
The animation looks much cleaner in this one than your last one. The artistic quality for the scenery himproved quite a bit too in which case in some parts it looked like you used nu-pastel for color effects.
I kinda liked the way you told the story here actually. The white rabbit seemed to be the idea of a dream that the boy is spending his entire life pursuing. Another good point is the distractions and other challenges put between him and that dream. In the end he runs past them all until he finally catches the rabbit.