I don't like parodies. Let me rephrase; I hate parodies. In this case, it holds your writing back immensely, taking what could be a funny story and forcing into some specific constraints that limit the potential story and force in obvious, bland jokes.
However, despite the writing being held back, your animation was good, albeit a little too minimal at points (in comparison with the more visually intense segments). The sound was also good, clear and edited well.
I can't see to giving a four or above to a parody, especially one that doesn't add anything significant to the culture of the subject matter, but with this animation and sound, I can give a 3.5. I hope that you find that acceptable.