Unresponsive controls, poor blending of graphics, and an already tired theme and genre makes Jack a dull boy. Seriously, terrible Slender Man....he could have been scary, I think, if the drawing was at least cleaned up somewhat, or given a more definite style. As it is, looks like stickman-version of Jack Skellington with a balloon for a head! It's not scary at all. Maybe if Slender Man grabbed the player when they died and carried them off or something....
And the controls....I think it's screwy that if I get caught behind a red box then my only option is to jump and roll (maybe, didn't get a chance to get it to work), but no matter how hard I tried...if I got trapped behind a red box, I got stuck and died.
And that roll doesn't seem to serve a purpose...I mean it's interesting, but so what? It doesn't do anything.
I do like that the controls are static and don't make the player switch back and forth between mouse and keyboard to do simple things like say....restart the game.
I also really like the inclusion of hi-score tables. I think that really bolsters the interest in the game.
out of 10...
gfx - 4 (poor blending of various styles)
sfx - N/A (I have no soundcard)
design - 5 (cool hi-scores, but tired theme)
gameplay - 4 (poor controls, bad physics)
overall, this could have been a much better game if it either wasn't Slender-themed or just did what it tried a little better. I think the design is okay, but overall this really seems sort of uninspired and I think it doesn't work, given what it does. Slender was never a really good idea in the first place, and I wonder if even the people who were fans are sick of it yet.
I think that your next game will be radical, but I sincerely hope it's a much more original idea and that it's a reasonable filesize, as 10mb is a very rude thing to upload. To me, it says you really don't care how long I have to wait to play the game.