Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!
The sprites are so amazing!!!!!!!!!
The only thing is: the subtitles are a little messed up.
In any case, can't wait for part two!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviews for "SMB:HOTS Episode 1 Vol 1"
Before i start my review i need to say this...ANOTHER ONE!? How many Mario fan videos are there and when will it end. I'm not saying this cause i don't like them I'm saying it cause its put on Newgrounds but its never given an end, NONE. and iv said this before and i will say it again, If I am wrong and there is one that is complete then throw me a link on a PM cause I'm still waiting for it.
And now the review:
Grammar, I get what they are saying but you really need to work on that a little. The story seems a little confusing so far, first some sort of alien invasion is coming and then we find Wario and Waluigi trying to break into peache's castle, some how getting rapped into Bowser's plan to raid the castle, But its the first episode so ill let that slide for now. over all it has something going for it so ill give it 3 stars
I'm guessing english is not your first language, yeah?
If this is really that important to you, then maybe an english dictionary will help, since you misspelled quite a few words. But if that's too boring, then find someone who knows english better and is able to write things down for you.
Other than that, when working with characters that are notorious for not talking or using speech bubbles of any kind, then it would probably be better for you to uphold said notoriety and avoid having them talk at all.
A prime example would be Mario.
On the subject of speech, it IS a little slow, like Gallowswaiting said. Since we have a pause button, putting the text box up there long enough for us to read it shouldn't be to much of a concern.
As for the things that are awesome;
-Your animation is of high quality.
-You seem to be trying to paint the Wario Bros. as comic relief, so an "A" for effort.
-The music is very well selected.
-Aaroca-
Good job, I have a look at part two when it's out.
Impressive Animation, great music score, but as other have said, the storyline felt a little dragged out and boring, and your grammar. Now your grammar is understandable seeing as your from sweden. Other than that... awesome series, i'll be watching you for the next parts in your series :D
LordAsylus responds:
Thanks you.
needs better grammer and better word choice but i can see thsi being amazing
LordAsylus responds:
Thanks!!