I think that when he was going down the elevator, maybe he could had talked on his mind of why he was going there. What was his mission, or something.
Reviews for "PHASE ONE"
No affence but the story line sucks. But the graphics are awsome but why is he/she there? and whos the other guy?
I liked it. You're pretty good at making it look 3D but really be flat. Though, the shape of the character's body seemed a little weird, and the way he/she held the gun was somewhat strange. The running animations need a little work around the legs, and just watching the constant, exactly the same pattern made the character look more like a robot than a living thing. It was still one of the best 3D animation I've ever seen on Newgrounds.
A+ for effort
once u get better at animating in 3d you'll be an awesome director
Nice animation overall, but there are some things that bothered me and some that I liked, im going to try to list them:
1. Loved the camera work, nice transitions, and it gave good storytelling with it.
2. the animation bothered me in some details, like the hips, they never move with the running or walk, and the upper body is almost static in the running transition, there should be more movement there.
3. the lighting, GOD it was GOOD!, it helped with the mood, same as the cameras, nice job.
and finally 4. dunno if you modeled all of it (I suppose you did) but that is really good modeling, liked the colors too, really thrilling and gloom like.
Welp that is all of it, a little tip would be to make the animation more lively, don't be afraid to exaggerate the movements and to make more parts in the body move. Can't wait to see more :)