I have to admit, the animation was wonderful - but when I read you did it with a mouse i pooped a brick. Good luck on part 2, looking forward to seeing it!
Reviews for "Out of Order 1"
Great! Looking forward to episode 2! ^_^
Loved the background and character style.
The characters look drawn simply (of course you animate on your own instead of having a big-ass team to animate it so you cant have that many details and have it do-able) but they aren't looking cheaply animated. And that way it's really looking more like it's a chosen style choice instead of a natural compromise you have to make as an animator.
The voice acting was great to. They put up some great voice. Not only sounding that they can do a good voice but you can also clearly hear there people know what they're doing with voice acting.
Little point of improvement to the voice actors though. The voice acting itself can great, but I think the voice actors should pay a little more attention of the articulation. English isn't my native language but when watching other series in english, most proffessional voice actors manage to articulate their sentences a little more clear than you would actually speak in real life, and I as a foreigner can still easily understand everything said. Not that I couldn't understand jack shit. It's just a a foreigner i had some more trouble with certain parts clearly understanding everything.
So, yeah. Kinda small thing i'm trying to tell but I needed a little more explanation to make sure I got the general idea across :p
kmau responds:
I know what you mean, I'm from germany and I just can't understand a few english-speakers very well. In movies etc. however most (voice-) actors utilize a clear "school english" non-natives are more familiar with.
The simpler symbol animations ARE a compromise! I wish I could've had the time to do everything frame by frame.
I'm in manly love with that voice! (It resembles the narrator of Bastion!!!)
Epic! I can wait for more >.<
I can't wait to see more!
kmau responds:
me too
Pretty good actually!
i didn't understand everything though, i was a bit confused at the beginning.
the animation is clearly the best thing in the flash, the voice acting could be better, because sometimes it looks like they are talking in a closed space, with a tiny echo.
heh, overall its an awesome flash, looking foward to see your next animation!
-~-Stucky-~-