i acually like this hope yu make an episode 2
Reviews for "Out of Order 1"
great start bro excited for future installments
I'm glad to see real animators on newgrounds again. Only problem is that most people who start a "series" usually just quit after the first entry. I hope y'all manage to keep this goin, it'd be nice to see another full fledged series spring to life on NG again :D
This isn't meant to be an insult, but the voice acting could use a bit of work. Also, why did the girl randomly say "kill me"? That seems kinda weird if it isn't a main part of the plot.
I definitely taste some Cowboy Bebop in this. Me like.
BEST FUCKING THING I'VE SEEN IN AGES!
This series is going to be amazing. I mean, it's going to be brilliant. I'm not even going to try to criticize. 4.5 stars because there is some room for improvement.
Only one thing. I beg of you, please PLEASE see this series through to it's end. I've seen so many amazing pieces of work start here on Newgrounds, filled with amazing talent, and every time they fizzle out before the end. really. I mean it. I've never seen a single serious series with a strong storyline last here. they all just... stop. Usually the creator moves on, gets to a new stage in their life, and no longer feels the need to finish them.
Please, I beg you, finish this.