2/5 scored and 1.5/5 reviewed
I think you're aware of the lack of effort in this, at least you should be. The lack of actual plot is staggering, it's like what? 3 sentences and 1 sentence on a loops until it's indiscernible from English? The joke wasn't exactly funny either, I mean, where's the material coming from? "Ok, so the scene opens with shaggy telling Scooby has a finger up his ass and then Scooby continuously repeats the line in his usually hard to understand tone of voice and then Shaggy says 'like, fuck this, and tweens out"
No effort on the joke, no effort in the script. The character design was good, granted, as per your other work, I was expecting this to suck much less than it really and honestly does. I don't know, perhaps this seemed much funnier to you as you wrote it, like a "had to be there" joke, and if you personally enjoy it than fine, but it really doesn't stick with me personally at all. (but hey, at least you got all the kiddos thinking it's super funny, there's that, then again, anything to do with naughty parts they find hilarious, go figure?)
I hope to see some higher caliber work from someone I know is more talented than this in the jokes department, until then.
- Hollow -