The third page of text went by too fast to read. The ending went by too fast to read because it disappears when you press space and spamming space is how you win. You insulted a specific religion by describing the character as "an angry Christian". (This wasn't necessary, you could have said "religious fanatic" or something like that.) Finally, you didn't tell us what your Ludum Dare theme was. Without these flaws it would have been an okay game, especially for being made in less than 24 hours.
Reviews for "Evolution:NO!"
alright-ish. its just too simple, and as others have said, the ending is easily skippable. And to those people saying he insulted all of christianty your just choosing to be offended. did he said "AN angry christian" not "all christians in the world are angry and stupid and this is an embodiment of every single one." The word "an" means a single person, which, as we all know, there are some horrible people who happen to be christian. If this was the same game about "a scientology nut" proving his religion, no one would complain "unless that is, there are scientologists who have the same behaviour problems as you guys, who love getting offended so they can voice their opinion to show people how amazing and understanding you are." if you dont think its funny (which I don't think so, since the humor comes from a single, done to death joke) then simply say that. Don't make a mountain out of a mole hill and all that jazz. Did the game maker say all christians are angry stupid people? No? Then shut up about it. kthnxbye
ThatRedAnt responds:
thanks for saying this. i don't think the game is very good, either, to be honest. it WAS a Ludum Dare entry.
Downvoted becuase, well. It's essentially a press x to win game.
Not all that entetrtaining, thumb gets sore from speed tapping the spacebar.
no ending?