This isn't what i expected at al!
Reviews for "Play By Heart"
alphastarr responds:
Awesome! Thanks; the prompt was "a break in the pattern", AKA "unexpected twists"! Nice to see you think we fulfilled it! :D
I give this a good job Thumbs up! 3/5
Well done! As a HS fan this was well orchestrated, with very little room for plot holes. It seems something feasible and likely to occur within the confines of the narrative!
I do have an issue with the background music. First of all, it would be awesome if, in the description, you could make note of all the songs you used, just so people know where they can go to find them. And also, a lot of the sound was clipping in the flash. I'm not sure why this is the case, but it could get distracting while navigating.
Anyway, excellent story, excellent idea!
alphastarr responds:
Thank you for the constructive criticism! :)
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