I really liked it. The idea 'n stuff and the visuals.
I mean the animation was smooth and the art was great. Graves voice is sexy and mmany people just can't appreciate smooth animation?! It may be not at easy do achieve as it looks. Keep up the good work, and maybe do something longer in the future. That'd be great to watch.
Right now I'm afraid of that red text saying I have to submit something with high 'helpfulness' value... and this is like my first revision. I hope I'll get the hang of it soon T__T