Why were you looking at my dick anyway Fred!? Great flash. I was gonna mention the stretching of the eyes but BCRice beat me to it. The flash just looks great overall.
Reviews for "Discretion"
Really great animation. I really liked the way the eyes stretched when the brows would lift. Really nice touch -- almost looked like it had AE effects with some of the warping, which is awesome.
Really good stuff. :)
I have a friend who always leaves his pants undone upon exiting the bathroom. Disgusting.
That was sooo fucking hilarious!!!! But yet abit disturbing
That was perfectly executed as far as I can judge. The voice acting was excellent, and the art/animation was simple yet effective. The writing was well done (did you come up with all of those?); the way you sequenced the dialogue combined with the increasing severity of the voices really helped to convey the sense that the situation was elevating, right up to the big payoff at the end when Fred just comes out and says it. It was a predictable and classic set-up, but its charm came from how well the characters were expressed. The facial expressions of the characters during the last few bits of dialogue really made the movie for me, with their eyes bugging out and such. My only complaint is that the mouth movements were missing some shapes. I didn't know what it was right away but something seemed odd about Fred's mouth movements when he first started talking, it was like an uncanny valley effect where there was just one thing dissimilar in an otherwise natural reproduction. By the way, your tweens are super smooth.
The natural behavior of the characters made it easy to tell what was happening even before Fred said the climactic line, so the viewer starts expecting the dialogue to lead up to a big payoff, and that's exactly what happened. The overall humor came from the energy expressed at the end, but the ending was only effective because of the well executed build-up to it.
Overall, one of my favorite flashes. Great work and looking forward to more from you!