This game sadly for me is a true case of style over substance. It looks brilliant, the artwork is extremely impressive but he game itself is rubbish. the character has such a small head start that you die almost instantly all the time making it painfully slow to save up some money, it isn't explained if you are meant to hit the boxes you just find out that you aren't when you first do and because of these facts it's simply frustrating to play for longer then a couple of minutes.
The way to go about improving it is to simply give the character move of a gap at the start and also to have an instructions page when you begin.
Hats off to Kinsei01 for the artwork.