This was terrible. Just simply terible. Animation was bad, there was no story to it, it wasn't at all funny at all and the end was just plain gross. You can tell just by looking at you put NO efford what so ever into it.
Reviews for "Minecraft Gone Wrong 18+"
GarrysWorld responds:
Dude. This is my third upload here. What did you expect? Egoraptor anmations or some sort? What the hell man. I know it sucks, but dude. You can't expect a new animator to do everything good in just one scratch. Sure I could take more time into it, but still. I'm no fuckng Egoraptor.
It's not the best. A joke about "pork" at the end would make this rated M, not T. The animations were choppy. The drawings could be better. And your humor could be better.
I'm not trying to be a dick, just giving you some helpful advice. More frames and stuff. Don't see this as an insult to your capabilities. There is room for improvement! Keep trying.
GarrysWorld responds:
Will be done! Thank you for the lovely response!
It was a good idea but the animation was too short and "blunt". Dialog with the sounds could have been added for a lot funnier outcomes at least for me. The only thing that destoryed the moment was the ending, it was just a huge drawback from the animation.
GarrysWorld responds:
I don't have a voice actor. And I am awful at voice acting myself. Hopefully you understand this.
Not good.
Sound 0
Animation 0
Story 0