I think for your first attempt it was good. The story is a bit odd. The mood is a bit bland. If you put in some music I think it would enhance mood really well. I like the little bits of humor in sad part by the way.
I think for your first attempt it was good. The story is a bit odd. The mood is a bit bland. If you put in some music I think it would enhance mood really well. I like the little bits of humor in sad part by the way.
As you said this is your first time. Not bad. Keep working.