I think the only thing that kept me from really enjoying this was the way the words came across..
I know if i read this with somebody it would be effing hiliarious cause doing anything on messenger is fun :)
But the voices just seemed...not fluent enough... it was trying just a little too hard and needs to be more casual between the talking
I've hesitated to post this review for a while. And have decided to do because I want to see you become 1 of the best animators and content creators out there.
The voice acting needs work. Jaxxy is no exception.
The animation was pretty good, but it would be great if the characters were shaded. (maybe try and do 1 with shading next time and see how it turns out.)
The humour.. well lets just say inside jokes aren't always the best thing to animate about. I don't know about anyone else but I got the feeling like someone said "The Cake is a lie jokes" in a room of older people.
Finally I have 1 last piece of advice.
My friend said to me once "Hey why don't you spend more than 2 days animating something and make something awesome. " So I did and it looked incredible in comparason. Its not a rush to get things out the door.
So just to sum up, Voice acting, Shading and Writing.
Other than that I can't wait to see the next FP jae toon.
It was ok. Could use more humor in it though man. Like randomness.
Jaxxy, your voice is beautiful, it sounds so joyful and kind.
o-o is this regular show or some shit