Nice!
For a beginning artist, you're really coming along in the audio portal. Everything is very nice. The only thing that is somewhat skeptical is the transition from the end of the loop to the beginning, they don't really match. You'd have to bring the loop down to that point at the end of the loop so that the beginning and end flow together.
_K00Ln355!_
-SuperDrummer146
-Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall"