toilet humor, it's simple but it works
Reviews for "Shitvich"
I love your work, you know I love your work. I respond to most of your submissions. But I have my criticisms.
I've decided that your longer animations are in a realm between original content and creative retelling. This is good and this is bad, I'll give you some more words to consider.
I think you need to separate your ideas, especially in a parody. You don't need to parody everything all at once. The whole scout-medic thing could have been it's own animation, and in that animation you could have expanded on it and made it funnier. There's nothing more annoying than a scout spamming "MEDIC!" even though it sounds kinda cool BECAUSE it's annoying.
The heavy argument was pretty garbled. You probably know this. Consider subtitles?
And no replay button this time! I know my previous criticisms were that they were hard to find, but there isn't one this time! I hope this is just a gimmick to get more advertisement money.
As always, I look forward to your future work. I truly believe if you separate your ideas within a parody idea, the quality of the stories will dramatically improve. I think animations like "Cloock!" and "Gokar" are hysterical because they have no irrelevant story telling. They're simple, clear, and comedic. That's something you should really stick with.
I thought this was pretty well done. I think it's nice that you didn't use the exact same old thing done in every parody of TF2. Sure some of it is old, Scout being a little shit, Sniper never getting head shots, Medic never healing. Eh, that is actually quite a bit. Anyway, I personally liked the fact that it looked like you "cartoonified" what looked like screen shots. It's a nice art style change, no Gmodders just dragging ragdolls around and making 10 screen shots without any lip-sink for the whole "movie". The humor though was a little dry, but the spy part almost killed me. Also, Spazkid and ChocolatEaterZ need to take the sticks out of their ass's an enjoy something for once. All in all, Good work. 4/5 8/10
i wonder how their kids felt when that happend
This looks like garry´s mod