If you would have put on a little bit more at the end, maybe it would've made more sense.
Maybe i would've rated higher. But a game that starts with a teenager playing an 8-bit style game about the Iceland volcano...
Also, I'm listening to the music as I'm writing this and it sounds like a slasher movie.
Anyway, for a preview it's pretty good. It might not explain the point of "a game that would help teenagers deal with grief" but that is essential. In a real market, it would make people buy your game, if you gave out free copies of the preview in the game section.
Although a game like this wouldn't sell, At least in today's market, Perhaps you can relese the full version on here?
SYNOPSIS:
As an actual game, it sucks.
As a preview, it's kinda good, but kinda climbs down the proverbial cliff, rather than hanging on it. If you would have shown the vehicle that she was apparently traveling in, and the setting in which it was traveling in, that would have left a good cliffhanger, and i would've rated 3, maybe even 4. Also, if you would have explained how this would help teenagers deal with grief, you would've gotten a definite 4, maybe 5.
FINAL THOUGHTS:
All you really have to do is hold a button.
I gave you 1 1/2 stars because of the artwork at the end.
If somebody can explain how this helps teens deal with grief, i will do a follow-up.