Although the sound for the girl was a little incomprehensible, I still find the "messy" artist style cute, and matches along with the little girl's dialogue. I think that it's stupid for all the bad reviews, comparing this to Lucky Day: when they are both completely different art and story styles, Lucky Day being drama and trying to prove a point, and this, humor, just for laughs.
5 stars, keep making such good and funny works!