good, cept for the annoying music
Reviews for "No Elephants in Here"
hillrdavid responds:
I was originally going to just have an outside ambience instead of music, but I thought it seemed too sparse and lonely then. I guess maybe I could have chosen a better track though.
An interesting animation. I usually pride myself on being able to forsee what happens in movies but you surprised me with this. The ending text made me laugh,if only that infiltration had gone as planned..
Overall,good animation. 4.5/5
hillrdavid responds:
I'm glad it surprised you ;)
well i did not expet that to happen "well played old chap"
Wow, that was really awesome, and you've improved a lot! The animation is incredibly smooth. The backgrounds are great. The voice acting fits perfectly. And that ending.... man, wasn't expecting that. I laughed. Really great animation!
hillrdavid responds:
Thanks for the comment. I was really impressed by your animation for this round, so it's pretty cool to get this kind of a reaction from you ;)
Trunker, Munker, Blue Jay, Spy:
Well, the ending was definately a plot twist I didn't see coming. Animation was very fluent and efficient, and I enjoyed the background art and graphics. Dialouge, though little of it, was well executed by your friend, and I hope you drag him into voicing some future projects. The plot twist and "slow" blue jay were comical and help the flash comedy wise. However, I didn't identify how it related to the theme literally or meaning. I mean, the elephant wasn't exactly in a room nor did I exactly see a problem that was being neglected, but maybe I'm taking this too much to the heart. Wish the text could've been matched with horrific, yet absurd, pictures of the mishap's result, but being on a deadline does temper finishes. Replay button for viewing convience would be appreciated, if plausible. Good work, and may you advance further into this thrilling tourney.
hillrdavid responds:
Thanks for the review. I tried to include the metaphorical meaning of "An Elephant in the Room" by having the 4 birds show unvoiced concern about the chipmunk, while the other bird doesn't understand the problem. I also included a literal elephant, even though it isn't actually in a room.