Interesting - I like thed the sketchy smooth style of animation but the content was lil miss for me - weither it had to do with the storyboarding or the loud music i found the plot hard to follow =(
Reviews for "The Elephant"
Very good animation, I loved the way you used the expression.
By the way, the music is superb! Almost crying here...
I give 4 stars for animation quality, but only three for the story. The girl is clumsy and works in a glass shop which is an homage to your area's expression, we all get that. However it all falls apart when she gets angry at the shop keeper and breaks an elephant on purpose and storms out. What in the world is that about? She is clumsy and breaks two items earlier, when she looks to the shopkeep, he dismisses it with calm indifference, when most shopkeepers would be furious and take it from her pay. She comes across as a disrespectful brat who should be fired from her job. So I can't give you a higher score for the story sorry.
I think your animation is great no matter how life less it is, I still find this the beast.
I got it completely. :) Wonderful allegory and great presentation. Loved the music and the animation!