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Reviews for "Not so Happy Ending"

Hey Jae, Its Mantlion from the live chat. This came out great! looking foward to the next one.

Jae responds:

Thanks man!

Dude I must admit, although your art style isn't the cleanest animation I've seen, I absolutley love how it looke in motion. I've never seen anything like it. Great simple concept, and voice acting! Keep it up Jae!

-EthanAlways

Jae responds:

Thanks Ethan!

Nice, I imagine the same problem with being a male stripper. :p

Graphics were lively, cartoon, motion I don't see too often.

The joke is simple, with beginning and end. Not the best joke, but good enough to be recognized.

One star off for....well lack of atmosphere as previous reviews said. The story didn't drawn me in all the way. Maybe the recommendations other people been giving can help.

I can imagine lotion being a topic in the joke for the back and front. :D

Jae responds:

Hahaha thanks this is a good review!

rofl dude thats fucken gross.............................I LOVE IT!!!

Jae responds:

:D yay thank you

I thought the animation was pretty unique and it looks like a decent amount of time went into it, it beats motion tweens any day. Also I like how this video isn't a parody, which is a bonus to me.

But I didn't find it really super laugh-out-loud funny to be honest. The humor was very drawn-out. Voice acting was pretty good, but the lack of background noises or music or really any atmosphere sorta killed it for me... FightingSeraph pretty much hit the nail on the head with his review, I have to agree with a lot of stuff he said. Had some potential but not the greatest execution in the world.

Overall I liked the visuals, the line-work was pretty unique, and the colors were nice and vibrant. Lots of pictures I see. But some of the motions don't really look right, I dunno, the characters sorta get deformed and it transforms into a bit of a mess.

But yeah it had potential, and I thought it was unique, but I didn't think it was really anything super satisfactory.

Jae responds:

Thanks?