I personally found all of the rules and regulations well thought out. This could actually become a great MMO. Just a few tweaks here or there (example: alternate ways to gain experience) and this could be quite fun. This and any other suggestions for making this a real game could also help you get some ideas for the series as well!
Reviews for "TOME Traveler's Guide"
you should make this real,but take away all the rules and limitations and make combat unristricted by battlegrids so that the terrain can be used in battle
YOu should make this into an actual flash game on ng!
I spotted a Steve Vent in there. Well done sir
This could actually become a game, based on the knowlege you alreaddy have... too bad it isn't :/ great guide though ^^