Reviews for First Animation

[JojotheJester]

Amazing for a first run with flash! this is by far better than what I would usually see as someones first submission, you have obviously put some more time and work into it and for that reason alone it should stand to stay in eternal glory apon the grounds of new.

Couple of tips I could possibly give you are this:

Make sure you have a pre-loader, NG provides tons of them for free,
it plays on infinite loop, should have a replay button and stop once done playing through.
Even a few sound FX can brighten the entire thing and you can usually get them for free if you search long enough.

Art wize is not so much my field but I would say that some of it moves by a little too quickly for me to get a sense of what is going on, he opens a box and there is something inside it that makes him dissapointed? or the thing dissapears? its not realy quite clear.

All critique aside this is a very solid piece that shows you have artistic skills and can put them to use making something that is very watchable :)

- Cheers

Khoalazan responds:

I'm very interested in doing so :D but it is very expensive to obtain the materials that helped me accomplished this piece of animation

[jetfusion]

Not bad the animation is fluid and such. It could have done with some sound or color to liven it up. Good attempt!

[ViolaArouraHope]

First things first, sound or your distinctive lack of. To really boost your ratings it needs something be it background music, voice overs or SFX the silence was too deafening. Then the storyline, I'm a bit confused about what it is supposed to be. On a positive note it was pretty well made apart from the odd bit here and there (e.g. the explosion when it lands) but with the afore-mentioned things it could be a lot better. Very good for a first animation.

Khoalazan responds:

Thank you, i know it was very fast and confusing, I'll try to improve in the future :)