A quality madness but at some points the action was a bit slow, and you should have left it at more of a cliffhanger. But still good.
A quality madness but at some points the action was a bit slow, and you should have left it at more of a cliffhanger. But still good.
I agree with you, i'll improve...hopefully!
Not bad, it still needs that wobbly Madness style.
Thanks! Would you mind telling me what "Wobbly Madness style" means?