This is a great idea and is a funny idea, but needed to be executed just a little better to get the best score, your design and character skills are really good, so there is nothing wrong with your drawing skills. The animation is mostly good as well, what I personally didn't like was the thought bubble scenario, this could have been done with little lip syncing instead or showing it in full screen, obviously we already get the idea, its just a suggestion anyway. Music was really good as well. Enjoyed it.