It was decent and quick. One thing I will note is time and place was an issue in one scene. For example, the merchant you would spot just before the city, pass him after the medicine talk; however, as your brother when he passes that section, (which was technically before the main character did) the merchant isn't there. If he was in the town, he would be killed or likely stop at all the dead people.
I also note on your way back from the city after getting the axe, where did he go? He couldn't of gone up as the place is blocked with the tree and he for sure couldn't of returned from the city as that's where you came back from. It's small, but it was something I noticed.