Sorry Friend, this just isn't NG material.
Nice first try though!
Reviews for "Escape"
Flyingdingo0827 responds:
not sure if sarcasm or not...
Anyways, like I said before this was my first flash project. I wasn't necessarily expecting it to become the next "pico" or "angry birds" or anything like that. I pretty much uploaded it because I wanted to see what NG thought and to hopefully get some criticism that could help improve the game (which, thankfully I did).
Also...it's not really fair to compare a game made by a newb to 5 star works like "pico," "castle crashers," or "madness combat." That would be like comparing a baby's first steps to an olympic runner, there would be no comparison.
Anyways, I'm sorry that you weren't able to enjoy the game but thank you anyway for submitting a review.
Thanks for reading and have a nice day,
-flyingdingo0827
I think it would've been more interesting if it were more visual, with actual images and interactive gameplay rather than just the text on the screen, but you did a good job with telling the story. I think there may already be a game called Escape on Newgrounds though, so you may want to change the name. Perhaps.
Flyingdingo0827 responds:
It seems as if a lot of people want visuals...
Well like I mentioned before (I think), this game was pretty much our final project for my mult-media 1 class. I only really had a week to finish this and I'm not really well-versed in the world of flash yet. Because of this, I could only really include the essentials and kept it extremely simple and easy to play for the sake of my class. Maybe one day when I can afford flash I'll add visuals to the game but for now this is really all I can do with my current knowledge of flash.
Anyways, thanks for the review and have a nice day,
-flyingdingo0827
Dieses Spiel ist sehr gut. Ich spielte es beim Spielen mit meinem Schwanz
I like text adventures. I miss having actual "choose your own path" books in my hands. I can't believe you have made this for a class with such glaring errors as "machinary" and " pull with all your might.... sage advice.... and then you pull the door open. I will PM you when I have finished the game.
Flyingdingo0827 responds:
I'm sorry :(
It's not an excuse for such errors but since I usually write using word I've gotten used to seeing that squiggly red line when I write.
Thanks for letting me know about this though, I'll just fix up the text next time I'm in class.
Thank you for helping me to avoid a stupid mistake on my project.
Its, its horrible, walk to right, you are dead,walk to left, are dead. its horrible :/.
Flyingdingo0827 responds:
Can you PM me and tell me which part this happened?
I honestly only remember one part where you die no matter what but it doesn't include going to the right or left :/
Anyways, I'm sorry that you weren't able to enjoy my game but I will get better at this in time...just not at the moment since I cannot afford flash.
Anyways, thanks for reviewing and have a nice day,
-Ty