You fucked up early on. Vegetto uses the Final Kamehameha, Gogeta's is the Big Bang Kamehameha. And I couldn't watch it further than gathering the fighters during the time between Z and GT. The animation is good, but your text is something to be desired. It either moves too fast in a couple places or it's just all wrong...
Reviews for "Dragon Ball Multiverse 1"
bocodamondo responds:
i know that Big bang kamehameha is not like that...but thats how it was in DBM manga. i was confused myself. but oh well
You could do better on the spelling. There are some major issiues with it.
Great Job! Everything clicked at the end. Blew my mind!
This... this is amazing... this is the mother of all What-If's... simply amazing...
Also, what is the main character of universe #2? a 1/4 human, 1/4 saiyan, 1/4 namek(don't ask me how...), 1/4 kai woman who was the first to unlock the SSJ5 level?
bocodamondo responds:
it dosnt matter whatever she is. if you watched the manga then you'll know she get 1 K.O'ed by arale <3
This is actually not bad! All it needs is some voice acting and this would be pretty damn good!