This is craftmanship, and very enjoyable. It's a matter of taste I guess, but personally I liked the music and the pacing. You know where the polishing can be applied, but the majority of flashs passing by on Newgrounds need more of a thorough paint job instead of some polish. So for me this one stands out.
Keep 'm coming I'd say.
Movement was a little robotic, as somebody else said before. Of course the fact you managed to make something good with that kind of animation style shows quite a lot of skill, regardless. The storyline truly is amazing and I was kind of in awe throughout it.
Bravo! More more! I kept on watching because of the animation- very nice!!
I like how you did this movie. How you came up with this idea from that cartoon very unexpected and surprising. I like how you added pictures on the wall of red, and how you put the bottles of beer and old food boxes, it makes you think he has been depressed for awhile and it was slowly eating away at him until he snapped and killed himself. Very well done!
I almost cried.