Wow! If you can do voice-overs and story as well as you can animation, this will be a great show! Definitely looking forward to it.
I see you were awfully inspired by SMBZ, but having Kirby characters over Sonic will give you plenty of flexibility to make an entirely different epic. I hope to see lots of Super Mario RPG characters in action. :D
Well, I'm looking forward to it. It looks well done and seems to be a Mario/Kirby: Right Back at Ya crossover which will be a nice break from the Sonic crossovers. I just hope you don't pull too many elements from SMBZ (even though this looks like follow-up series). I think you should also make Kirby talk. Mario and Luigi got away with not talking in SMBZ because Sonic and Shadow could talk and made the connection with the audience. I don't think it will work as well if Tiff is the only one of the four heroes who talks.
This didn't lower my score, but that song is getting on my nerves. I don't know what it's from, but it has been used a bunch of times in other sprite intro/trailers.
Forgive me if my comment doesn't seem too enthusiastic about this future series. After recently learning that SMBZ was cancelled, It's going to be hard to adjust. The intro was good, but it's too long. If you do plan to use though, at least just use it like in the first episode and shorten it for the rest of the episodes. Other than that, I say good luck to you.
Hmmmmm, it is interesting
can't wait for the series! the intro is pretty good.