nice.
Reviews for "Life & Times of a Pencil"
It was okay, I understand that you are new here so this was decent for your first upload. The animation on the kid's arm was weird to me, and instead of an endless loop I think it would have been better with just a replay button. The voice acting was okay and yet again this is your first thing uploaded. You have a lot of potential don't give up, I'd like to see some more from you :3
2.5/5
Scream was abit too loud, try to make the backgrounds more interesting. Good first attempt though!
Pretty short. Art is pretty bad. The joke is kinda good, could be better if you made more jokes and smashed them together, like in asdfmovies
untitledproductions responds:
This clip was actually inspired by asdfmovies. :D I will definitely make a compilation at some point. Thanks for the review!
Bad vioce acting and it loops