Reviews for Patterns: I Want a Wife

[Pherow01]

It was ok u needed a play screen thing and maybe color (not knowing whether it was supposed to or not...) and the rest was pretty much great hope to see more anmation from u

-Pherow01

fnrevolution responds:

thanks next time ill be sure to address the play button problem and thanks for the helpful review

[nathandrake]

cute lol

fnrevolution responds:

thanks!

[vannila-guerilla]

Okay, funny, but some of the slides that had dialogue went too fast and I couldn't read it. Not all, but there were some. Also, there should be a play button instead of it being on a loop.

fnrevolution responds:

i guess next time instead of doing the dialogue in one take i sound do each on separately so that way some of the pictures are not rushed, so that way my audience may read it. and i should have used the newgrounds upload play button, and that you for the helpful review vg!