THIS HAS EGORAPTOR WRITTEN ALl over it........
Would suggest you work on creating your own style. The jokes are there, but can't help but feel like your trying to hard to imitate Egoraptor. Love the replay screen though.
Reviews for "Brofox Assault"
Brojack responds:
This section of the reviews are quite heavy with this sort of input. I'll agree with you, it is similar to egoraptor's work, but just because someone else has done this kind of thing before, doesn't mean it's not still funny, or that I should change my sense of humor just to suit people like you.
It wasn't a total waste of time, but it tried too hard to be "Metal Gear Awesome" and so used the same type of gags and sketch setup. It would be a much better spoof of Star Fox if it tried to make its own humour.
A nice attempt and technically OK done, but lack of originality and the miserable attempt of a "funny" ending song, makes this one land far shorter than its potentials.
Brojack responds:
Thanks for your input. In fact, this flash didn't try to be metal gear awesome, it just ended up being the same kind of animation. Insane and loud humor is the kind I find funniest, and is not owned by egoraptor. It's the same as how the show 'how I met your mother' is extremely similar to 'friends', with the same kind of humor. completely different jokes are used, it's just the same kind of style. I didn't 'rip off' anything from egoraptor, as none of his material is in here. but thank you for your consideration.
mayhem
Brojack responds:
Indubitably.
I can tell you've seen Egoraptor's work and I'm going to take a guess and say Sanity not Included (The 'singing' at the end just reminds me of a sketch they did with Mario). I enjoyed but maybe try to be a little more original in the future? Oh and I would change your drawing style otherwise your going to get a lot more people saying your ripping off Egoraptor.
But all in all, I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.
Brojack responds:
Glad you enjoyed the piece. I'm alright with being criticized for being similar to egoraptor, as long as the rest of the flash isn't disregarded. And yes, the idea for the ending song did hit me after thinking of sanity not included, good catch :)
The piece is original however, as no existing material was used. The art also had to be kept simple, as I coudn't find my tablet. Thanks a lot though!
Lame and unoriginal jokes here and there.
A lot of jokes and the art style were definitly copied from Egoraptor.
Fale n gabe
Brojack responds:
I wasn't aware that my work was 'Fale n gabe'. Clearly you are a man of intelligence as you've seen through the ruse of this animation and discovered the truth that it actually deserves 0 stars. The jokes may've been 'lame', but they weren't unoriginal. None of egoraptor's jokes or images are in here, I just have a similar animating style. Sorry that ruined months of hard work for you.