You aren't bad with the animation, the writing is just awful. Don't take it personally, just use your animation skills with a better writer.
Reviews for "LOLSKETCH"
GET OFF THE STAGE
This is a lot like a 14 year old saw ASDF (which i un-funny to beign with) and decided to make their own. The jokes weren't clever and relied heavily on LOL XD RANDUM HUMOR X3 and no one that isn't a teenager likes that really. The art and animation is done pretty well though, I hope to see something more original next time!
This is proffesional and funny!
Well..
I thought it was (for the greater part) pretty hilarious. The transition gag got old after a while, but didn't really alter my opinion of the film. I thought it was a rather suiting dedication to Edd.
A toast to this flash, and a toast to the departed Mr. Gould.