A very well told and slightly interactive story.
Enjoyed it. Though a bit depressing.....
A mistake is not intentional. Most perceived 'mistakes' are done on purpose until the regret hits then they become 'mistakes'. SO..they should be called 'Regretting On purposes...?' I dunno.
Anyway...nicely done!
You highlight a very good issue!
Mistake are not intentional. At least, not in a conscious way.
However, when a mistake occurs is because we are somehow too weak to prevent it.
If a cup accidentally slips from your hand, it wasn't your intention to break it but your reflex wasn't fast enough to catch it.
Maybe He lost his [mind] balance just for a moment. And he wasn't strong enough to prevent ...the raptus. Doing what He did wasn't a mistake, but maybe the mistake was letting you take the control.
And maybe just that brief moment of weakness was enough to "destroy everything that you have"...
love the concept and story you sir are brilliant most little kids wont understand the story behind this that's why they are writing sucky reviews but in my case i loved it keep up the good work
man this is vey emotional game and it touched my heart . but who was the thing that appeared as the were walking to the girls house from the streetlamp
im crying ;-;
raptus