Notbad at all
OK so this was notbad at all, I love the intro and all the color and fast action it was really a great toon, this had alot of stuff going for it and i was pretty impressed with it through-out the whole film, you brought in some funny jokes and such and that made itpretty entertaining, and there was alot of audio and music put into this that was a plus, i like the humor you gave this sometimes i didnt understand it all but for the mostpart it was pretty entertaining, I did think you could have gone a little bit more though more jokes more random stuff would have been nice, as for improving on this well as mentioned more humor more random stuff, but overall this was a pretty solid toon, and congrats on getting front paged thats always a plus, anyways keep up the good work.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So some more humor and more random stuff happining and so on, as suggested, other then that this was pretty good.
~~OVERALL~~
This was a funny toon, very entertaining i enjoyed it and hope others enjoy it like i have.