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Stylistically, the flash is good, u show that u have indeed learnt a lot about this medium. I like the movement of the characters, and the Quality bar in the bottom left is useful. However, I feel the plot is confusing and its a trend that Im finding more and more on this website. WORK ON THE CONCEPT!! Its more important than the graphics. There are already too many hack and slash shorts in which characters are decapitated and split in half.