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Reviews for "Smile smile smile!"

This is pretty good. The characters are almost dead-on in appearance, which is nice. I especially like the constellation of Twilight. The only thing I found lacking is that some portions of the song were fast and upbeat, but the animation just didn't capture the energy. Something you can improve on.

Hmm... I like it. Now, personally, I think the part that could use the most work would be the part where she's walking towards the camera. The walking seems a little off, and it's kind of dragged out - overall, the quality seems just a little lower than the other parts. Something else that struck me as odd was that Applejack is the *only* one who didn't get a smile. I mean, I suppose she had good reason not to, but it still felt out of place. Another tiny thing is that, at the beginning, the line in her tail seems to be bouncing out of time with the rest of her tail. And I don't know if this one makes much sense, but the smiles didn't look quite as "smile-ish" as I thought they should. They were a bit too... indistinct, I guess is the word.... Yeah, I'm a real master of communication over here. What I'm trying to say is that I think they needed to be more easily identifiable as smiles.

Anyway, this is largely a review by exception - if I didn't mention it, it was pretty good, if not better. Just make sure you practice lip synching and making the animation smoother and more lively and refine your concepts and yadda yadda yadda, all the stuff you'd naturally improve on anyway, and belt out another gem for us.

Overall, good job!

Oh... My... God... It's so f*#%ing PONY!!!!!

Well, though i'm not a pony fan, i would definitly recommend this to stay on newgrounds. It's a little change to the usual ''smashing up stuff and dropping pianos'' thing, and i rarely ever see any girls stuff on newgrounds (maybe because i'm a boy and aren't interested in watching stuff like that)

In any case, i'd like this video through the judgement in one piece as there should be something for everyone.

original is so much better.
this 1 is ... boring.