A nice little animation. This reminds me a bit of the Dad animations, with all the hyper-energetic antics.
The reason why I have it a 3 is that while it was fun to watch, the animation could use a bit more touch-up. :)
Reviews for "Maximum Happiness"
Brewster responds:
yeah i guess it is kinda inspired by Dad. thanks for the feedback!
This was pretty decent work
and as i get started on this submission entry, i found it entertaining it even gets better as it plays thru and such, Now while its just the start of things i think you really have something here, so keep going with that. But I like the creativity in this with the large creature causing havoc everywhere and so on, it was pretty amusing and gave me a few laughs here and there, the "VISUALS" were pretty fantastic i was just amazed at how everything was happening and you really pushed the effort here and thats what i really liked about it, So what else can you say about this, its amusing and entertaining and had some nice visual graphics so from start to the end it was pretty good entry.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And so this is where I suggest a few ideas on the good and bad points hoping to find and give some good points that can generally make this a lil better, but if not it was a decent flash in anycase. As for this submission i didnt really find much or anything at all, it was a pretty decent entry and is a stand alone submission, so at this point i would just say great job and hope to see more from you soon.
Brewster responds:
Thanks! I appreciate the review.
I didn't like it, at all.
Sorry man, but it seemed quite unoriginal. It seemd like you were going for the "storieless laughs" kinda flash, and i love those things, but i didn't laugh once. mabye i'm in a sour mood, but i doubt it.
Plus, most of the animation was pretty bad, just something any monkey with an artists brain could do. and speaking of artists brains, most of the stuff in your video used default textures in PAINT, and where you didn't everything was unbalanced and ackword, like the couches and floors and sand catsles and stuff. Where you should have used default circles and stuff you didnt, and where you did you shouldnt have. i dont know if this is what you were going for, but it was just so...disgusting to the eye. the whole video spoke "Amature" to me, somebody who needs more practice and, i hate to pop your ballon, IMO does NOT deserve daily second.
I'm not saying your work has to speak poetic volumes and make me laugh and cry and change my life, but please, put a little more than 10 seconds of half-ass into it. Shooting up through floors and butts rubbing against windows is something i get more than enough of with all the other stupid flashes. Make something more original that wasn't done in paint, and i'd be great about it.
I dont mean to come off as an asshole, i'm trying to tell you whats wrong with you flash. I hope you dont get pissed, and take everything into acct. because you clearly have the ability, now all you need is the push in the right direction. Okay? :D
Brewster responds:
I'll agree that I'm still an ameture and need practice. But I think it's pretty obvious that I put a lot more than "10 seconds of half-ass" into this flash. And I say flash, because this was made in Flash. I don't know where you got the idea this was somehow made in ms paint.
Other than those 2 points, thank you for the review. I realize not everyone is going to like what I put out, and frankly I'm a little surprised it took 7 pages of reviews to get to someone who didn't.
Cuteeeeeeee!!
Love the rainbow ball guy.
I feel ike that every day.
Brewster responds:
it's a great feeling
Ok animation. mediocre sound quality. music did fit the movie though. although you didnt quite match up the music and video as you can tell. last 20 seconds or so there is absolutely no sound.
Brewster responds:
the last 20 seconds? that shouldnt be happening. the song is supposed to play throughout the whole thing. it does for me at least.