suggestion
Ok dude, I like this its funny and has potential to be even funnier. First loes the robot voice thing it is really hard to hear and there is not emotion at all in the voice. Second try making the mouth movie a little bit in time with the words and third when he is desribing the ingredents have them pop up in the corner and have him point to them. Like when he said hobo meat I laughed but I would have laughed harder if you had a photo of a hobo getting cut in half or something.hope this helps good luck and oh yeah firestormkirby sucks.
later